中考英语作文万能模板及英语写作技巧
写好作文五要素:要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
1.要点:缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点要做到全,围绕中心。
2.结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话第二段:可以分析原因。第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。
3.逻辑:通过使用逻辑词体现文章的思路。
4.语法:语法是硬性的。如单词的使用,时态等要注意。
5.亮点:高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以一般词汇要限量用。
英语写作检查的原则:
1 内容要点:缺少一个内容要点,文章直接降到第三档
2 语法错误:名词查单复数和冠词问题,动词查时态语态和三单问题。
3 变换句式:过于简单的结构要试着变化
英语高分作文必备杀手锏—三段四步法
中考英语阅卷老师看写作主要有三个标准:
1)结构2)内容要点3)语言(词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词)看结构和内容要点定分数档,看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。
教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。
1 “三段”(三个段落)——针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点,让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类文。
中高考情景是作文,无论是那种文体,都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国的“高考”SAT 考试,(SAT是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试,故被叫过美国的高考)。
我们管这样的文章叫做Hamburger Writing(汉堡写作)
第一段记叙文议论文:开篇背景介绍(时间、地点、人物、事件)发表观点
第二段:故事发展论据、论点支撑
第三段:结局总结观点
2 “四步”
有了框架就相当于有了骨骼,而真正的血肉要靠四个步骤来实现。
步骤一:审题
审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生,我要说的是审题一定要做到五个方面:一审主题(写什么),二审体裁(记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议),三审时态(时态中考两个扣一分,三个降一档),四审人称(别犯低级错误),五审内容要点(一定要在试卷中画出,免得写的时候忘记,导致跑题)
步骤二:打草稿
中考一定要打草稿,两大优势
1中考不准在试卷更改,涂改带、橡皮、胶条(囧)、小刀(我小时候想都没想过),而中考时落笔错误是难免的,涂改就会后卷面分,打草稿就可以避免这个情况了。
2 正式写作是对草稿的在梳理,语言的在锤炼。
步骤三:正文写作
做到两点,一要凝练,而要变化。文章80—100字为宜,一定要注意使用过渡词、从句、50个句型和词组搭配。
步骤四:检查:
很多学生考试都会检查,但总是不能到自己的错误。原因很简单,方法不对:
中考英语满分作文必背句型
1. 重点句型
1). It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说…
2). … so … that … 如此… 以至于…… too … to do 太… 而不能…
such … that … 如此… 以至于…
3). not…until… 直到…才…
例: I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back.
4).The reason why + 句子is that + 句子… 的原因是…
The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。)
5). That is why + 句子那是…的原因
6). That is because + 句子那是因为…
7). It is said that + 句子据说…It is reported that + 句子据报道…
8). There is no doubt that + 句子毫无疑问…
9). It goes without saying that + 句子不言而喻,毫无疑问
10). There is no need to do没必要做…
11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义
2. 提建议
中考成绩
had better (not) do 最好(不)做how about / what about doing …怎么样?
I think you should do 我认为你应该…I suggest that you should do 我建议你做…If I were you, I would do…我要是你的话,我会做…
It’s best to do 最好做…Why not do / why don’t you do…? 为什么不…
3. 表示喜欢和感兴趣
like / love doing enjoy doing be fond of doing 喜欢做…
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in doing 感兴趣
4. .努力做…
try to do努力做…try one’s best to do= do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做…
make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做…
do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做…
spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做…
5. 打算做… / 计划做…
intend / plan to do 打算做…be going to do 打算/计划做…
decide to do 决定做…determine to do决定做…
be determined to do决定做…make up one’s mind to do下定决心做…
6. 表示想/希望
want to do = would like to do 想做…hope to do 希望做…
expect to do 期待着做…wish to do 希望做…consider doing 考虑做…
中考必背的30个作文经典词句
■ 必背知识
常用的名言警句
常用的名言警句
1. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友
3. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半Well begun is half done.
4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成
5. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马
6. Easier said than done. 说起来容易,做起来难
7. Easy come, easy go. 来得快,去得快
8. Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺点
9. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母
10. Look before you leap. 三思而后行
11. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人.
12. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳.
13. All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难.
14. Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪.
15. As you sow, so shall you reap. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆
16. I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort. 成功
要靠三件事才能赢得:努力,努力,再努力
17. Don’t put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 有事莫推明天.
18. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧
19. Bad news has wings. 好事不出门,坏事传千里
20. Honesty is the best policy. 做人以诚信为本.
21. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. 你必须相信自己,这是成功的关键.
22. Don’t judge a man by his looks. 不可以貌取人.
23. Lost time is never found again. 岁月既往,一去不回。
24. 熟能生巧。Practice makes perfect.
25.千里之行,始于足下。The longest journey begins with the first step.
26.Lost years are worse than lost dollars. 一寸光阴一寸金,寸今难买寸光阴
常用过渡语
23. 表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, in my opinion, according to, so far, as far as等?
24. 表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, finally等?
25. 表空间的过渡语:on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of… on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of等?
26. 表因果的过渡语:for, because of, one reason is that… another reason is that…, so, as a result (of)等?
27. 表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, instead of, although, otherwise, in spite of
28. 表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, that is, like, as follows, in other words, and so on等?
29. 表推进的过渡语:what’s more, on one hand… on the other hand…, in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not only…but also…, besides, furthermore, moreover等?
30. 表总结的过渡语:in short, in a word, in general, in all等?
第一部分写作技巧
话题一:写人记事
例文:初中阶段你印象最深的又是哪位老师?请用英语写一篇题为“The Teacher I Never Forget”的作文。内容包括:1.简要介绍老师的性格或特长;2.列举一个事例,说明老师是如何在学习上帮助或鼓励你取得进步的;3.感谢老师,祝愿老师。
The Teacher I Never Forget
How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is Mr. Zhang, an English teacher. He is very kind and friendly. He helped us not only in class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr. Zhang noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved.
I must say many thanks to Mr. Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future!
例文:假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日,是星期五,在放学回家的公交车上,你所经历的一件事情让你印象深刻。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。
要点:1. 一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车,老人拿着书包和小提琴;2. 你给老人让座,老人的孙子却
坐了下来,老人只得站在旁边;3. 孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝,并将空水瓶扔到车上;4. 你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人,保持环境卫生。
On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and a violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down fir
st. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus.
When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.
话题二:环保污染
例文:节约资源, 保护环境. 从我们身边的小事做起,假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生, 请以“My Low-carbon Life” 为题,写一篇短文,简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。提示: (1)每天步行上学; (2)离丌教室时,关灯、电扇、电视等;(3)不用水时, 记住关水龙头,循环使用水;(4)充分使用纸张;(5)不使用塑料袋。
My Low-carbon Life
It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, so we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps, fans, TV sets and lights in time when we don’t need them. What’s mo
re, water should be reused by us. Third, it is good to make full use of paper. We should use the both sides of the paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.
Lower carbon, happi er life. Let’s take actions.
例文:目前,我们的家乡正在实施“城乡清洁工程” (cleaning project).请你根据以下信息,给某英文报写一篇短文,就清洁卫生和食品安全两个方面谈谈你的看法和建议。状况:1.垃圾到处可见,污染空气、土地和水源。2.摆卖不安全食品,危害人们的健康。建议:1.城乡统一堆放垃圾。2.禁止生产不合格食物,不卖不买有害食品。
Presently, a cleaning project is carried out in our hometown. It is necessary for us to clean our living environment, because rubbish can be seen everywhere. The air, the soil and the water are all polluted. Some kinds of unsafe food which is harmful to people's health appear in the stores and some supermarkets.
I think we must stop the pollution and the harm. People must throw the waste into the rubbish bins. Don't allow anyone to produce and sell any unsafe food. Pay attention to the food before eating, sure it
is safe. If we can do that all, our hometown will soon be cleaner and more beautiful
话题三:体育健康
例文:每个人都有不同的生活习惯,养成良好的生活习惯,会使我们拥有健康的体魄。良好的生活习惯有哪些呢?例如:每天按时起床和睡觉;饭前洗手;多吃水果和蔬菜,不吃垃圾食品;多参加体育锻炼;不乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰;不要再马路上玩耍,横过马路注意交通安全等。
How to Develop Good Living Habits
Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can make us keep healthy. As teenagers, what should we do?
In my opinion, everyone should get up and sleep on time every day. Don’t play or watch TV all night. That is bad for our health and affect our work. We should eat more vegetables and fruit, and eat less meat. I advise everybody to take more physical exercises. Don't eat junk food, for example instant noodles. Don't litter and spit. Don't play on the road. Remember to obey the traffic rules. No jaywalking.
In a word, if we want to keep healthy and happy, we must develop good living habits.
例文: 请以I Love Sports为题写一篇英语短文。1.你喜欢的体育活动有哪些?2.进行体育活动有哪些好处?3.你最喜欢的体育活动是什么?
I love sports
I love swimming, running, ball games in my spare time. I think it is good for us to do some sports. Sports help to build up our body and make us strength. It can also keep illness away. By doing sports, I’m becoming stronger and more confident(有信心的) than before. My favorite sport is swimming. I like swimming because I like playing with water. Also I think swimming is more popular than other sports and it’s easier to learn. I feel relaxed when I swim. I love sports! I think everyone should spend some time on sports every day because health is more important than other things in modern life.
话题四:语言学习
例文:假设你校要举办一期英语墙报,交流学习英语的感受,请你按下面表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为“Find your own way to learn English” ,介绍你学习英语的体会。
1.最初的情况:学习困难。如:拼写听力差、语法出错、阅读速度慢。
2.现在的情况:学习方法。如:记
单元词汇表(vocabulary list) 多听磁带借书阅读3.学习体会:学好英语的关键。如:专心致志、自有方法。
Find your own way to learn English
There are many ways to learn English, but everyone should have his or her own way.
At first, I had many difficulties in Learning English. For example, I couldn’t spell some English words, and couldn’t understand what people said when they were talking fast. I often made mistakes in grammar and read very slowly.
Now I have found some ways to improve my English. I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in my mind. I listen to English tapes every day and I can understand mostly what people talk about. I often borrow English books and read them after class.
The most important thing to learn English well, I think, is to keep your mind on it, so that you can find your own ways to improve your English.
例文:假如你是张华,你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法,清根据以下要点用英语写封回信。除以下外再提出一条建议。
要点:  1.加入汉语班学习,可向老师学习并与同学练习汉语;2.看中文电视、读中文书、报纸、杂志;
3.听、唱汉语歌,有助于汉语词汇;
4.交中国朋友,即可练习口语又可了解中国。
Dear Dave,
I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice.
First, As a foreign, you need to go and join a Chinese learning activity group, the most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible.Second, if you want to improve your listening ability, you’d better read Chinese books, listen to the tapes and radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs. Third, you make some Chinese friends. Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some Chinese festivals to you, too.
In a word,I think we will have a good time .write to me soon.
话题五:旅游及交通安全
例文:越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?内容包含:1.遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example ,we must walk on walk side .when we cross zebra -crossing ,stop and look right and left ,then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on walk side.