2023年高考真题变式题分类汇编
专题28
书面表达真题变式题（新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷）
【2023年真题】
Ⅰ卷适用地区：山东、广东、福建、江苏、湖南、湖北、河北、浙江
Ⅱ卷适用地区：海南、辽宁、重庆、黑龙江、吉林、云南、安徽、山西
假定你是李华，你校外教要举办口语培训班，让练习口语的所有的学生两人一组练习，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，说说原因和提建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【参考范文】
Dear teacher,
I think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training class. I have a few reasons for my opinion.
Firstly, randomly pairing up students may lead to imbalanced language abilities within the groups. Some students might have advanced speaking skills while others may struggle wit
h basic conversation. This can hinder the progress of both students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other student to improve.
Secondly, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if they are paired with someone they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with. Building a positive and comfortable learning environment is crucial for effective language practice, and randomly assigning pairs might undermine this.
Instead, I suggest implementing a system where students can choose their own partners based on their language abilities and personal preferences. This allows students to collaborate with someone they are comfortable with, ensuring a supportive and productive learning environment.
Yours,
Li hua
【真题变式题1】
1. 简述目前网络平台的一些问题；
2. 提出你对改善网络环境的建议及理由。
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Nowadays, the use of social media platforms such as QQ, WeChat and Bilibili by high school students is increasing rapidly. However, these participations bring up several problems, such as the proliferation of fake news, the abuse of freedom of speech, and so on.
To improve the online environment, I suggest that school should promote an education programme for the students, which emphasizes the importance of the accuracy of informati
on and be aware of inappropriate words or works on the Internet. Besides, students should also take the initiative to build a healthy online environment by avoiding fake news, disrespectful words or trolling. Last but not least, teenagers should limit and balance the use of the Internet. Abusive and inappropriate behaviors from social media can be largely avoided if more time is put into outdoor activities and productive works.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。在社交网络日渐流行的今天，高中生使用QQ、、B站等平台的频率日渐增多。网络平台给同学们提供学习资源的同时，也带来了虚假新闻、滥用言论自由等问题。要求考生请就这一社会现象发表看法。
【详解】
迅速地：rapidly → quickly
引起：bring up → cause/bring about
建议：suggest → advise/propose
此外：besides → in addition
简单句变复合
偏爱考试版原句：However, these participations bring up several problems, such as the proliferation of fake news, the abuse of freedom of speech, and so on.
拓展句：However, these participations bring up several problems, which include the proliferation of fake news and the abuse of freedom of speech.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] To improve the online environment, I suggest that school should promote an education programme for the students, which emphasizes the importance of the accuracy of information and be aware of inappropriate words or works on the Internet. (运用了连接词that引导宾语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Abusive and inappropriate behaviors from social media can be largely avoided if more time is put into outdoor activities and productive works. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
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