专题二十一 短文改错
1.【2021·陕西】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for h
elp. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
【答案】
76.去掉in
77.anything 改为something
78.better改成best
79.decide改成decided
80.step 改为steps
81.well改成good
82.after改成when/while
83.a改为the
84.just后加to
85.enjoy改为enjoying
【考点定位】考查短文改错
【名师点睛】这篇短文改错是记叙文，短文的内容和同学的日常生活有关。错误之处的设置都是平常同学简洁错的地方。考查点比较全面，各种词性都考查到了，也涉及到一些语法学问的考查，如：非谓语动词，时态等。
2.【2021·四川】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ʌ），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：
1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；
3.3.只允许修改10出，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hi, Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the
problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and
after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays
now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I sh
ould do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
【答案】
61.加上to
62. tell--told
63. friend--friends
64.sing--singing
65. many--much
66.so--but
67. How--What
68. are--were
69. him--them
70. 去掉with
【解析】
试题分析：文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写信人的困扰。作者交了三个新伴侣，经常一起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其实作者并不宠爱这样，他想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友情。
61.加上to 考查动词want的用法，want用不定式担当状语，故加上to。句意为：我真地很想和你共享一下我经受的问题。
62. tell—told 考查时态。依据时间状语last time可知，此句需要用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。句意为正如我上次告知你的那样。
63. friend—friends 考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复
数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意为：我在这儿交了三个新伴侣。
65. many—much 考查代词。依据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意为：那真的花费很多。
66.so--but考查连词。上一分句意为：我不想再去；下一分句意为：我怕失去他们的友情，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。
67. How—What 考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，表示事情，故用what而非how。留意首字母要大写。
68. 21年高考成绩查询are—were 考查虚拟语气。依据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把are改成were。句意为：假如你是我,…。
69. him—them 考查代词。依据上文可知，作者交了三个伴侣，故用them而非him。句意为：你会和他们说吗？
70. 去掉with 考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意为：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。
【考点定位】考查短文纠错
【名师点睛】本篇文章考查同学的短文纠错力气。短文纠错力气考查的范围较广，如各类词类用法和各种语法学问。本篇文章中既考查了词类用法如：61、63、65、66、69、70题，也考查了同学的语法学问如：62、64、67、68，涉及多种语法学问。要求考生要通读全文，把握大意，还要逐读各句才能出错误所在。
3.【2021·浙江】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spent∧weekend with you. Luckily the I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8: am in Friday evening. On |
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of t
he class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
【答案】
side-sides
from-to
sit-sitting
easy-easily
is-was
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